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There is a ga_ , a hole in the whole where you were November 8, 2009

Posted by jewaira in Poetry.
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But how much like moths

we were,

repeatedly

burning ourselves

against

this flame

blinded by the intensity

until merciful hands

of  spirits stronger than our own,

cupped firm fingers

around us,

dimming the blinding light,

shutting out the attraction, and

granting us

space

.

,

.

and

clear vision.

=====

But

Are moths

ever free?

 

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1. Phantom Man - November 8, 2009

Aren’t we all attracted sometimes to someone or something that is not good for us? We all have our failings, and we all need the loving hands of someone who will help us let go of our flame. Sometimes “tough love” is necessary, sometimes tender love. And no, we are never truly free of our own demons; we battle them throughout our lives.

jewaira - November 8, 2009

:) reassuring words PhantomMan

2. Fons Moonen - November 8, 2009

?

question for you …
knowledge for me …
see you to morrow
watch out the fire !

:)

3. jewaira - November 8, 2009

I will keep well away from any flames Fons lol

4. intlxpatr - November 9, 2009

Yeh, moths can learn to avoid the pain of those flames . . .

jewaira - November 11, 2009

those that avoid the flames get pounced on by cats waiting on the side :P

5. Fons Moonen - November 15, 2009

The morning is dead and the day is too
There is nothing left here to lead me, but the velvet moon
All my loneliness I have felt to day
It’s a little more than enough to make a man throw himself away
And I continue to burn the Midnight Lamp, alone

Darling, can you here me calling you ?
So lonely
Got to blow my mind
Yeah, yeah

Burning of the Midnight Lamp
Hendrix (1967)
magnificent music while I do the dishes 17:36

jewaira - November 16, 2009

Thanks, Fons.